2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

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I have been seen an advertisement of Diao Washing powder, and a shot made an deep impression on me, which a little girl stood on a small wooden stool, tiptoed, struggled to find out the washing powder on the dresser. I was moved. The little girl stood her tiptoes so that she could catch the washing powder to help her mother do some housework. A strong love was spilt over mature scent by her tiptoes. She realized a little wish of standing on her tiptoes. I have been loved to watch ballet performance because I liked ballet dancers, who jumped as angel under the light, and the dark background reflected beautiful picture. I can feel a force and beauty blend of light and an upward force when they stood on their tiptoes together. They touch their dancing dreams by the tiptoes. I have been always stood on my tiptoes so that I could imitate person who dance, pick carambola over my head, or steal candy on the counter. However, with the time going I was no longer imitated boyishly others to stretch my tiptoes and I can pick the caarambola as soon as I stretch out my hand. Gradually, I find that I also need to stand my tiptoes in another floor of my life. I know I have to keep on posture of tiptoeing, because I have too much to learn and update, and become the pride and dependence of parents. You can tour more scenery than other people, touch more sunshine, closer to your dream by standing your tiptoes. I fell in love with tiptoe.