2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

过渡词和衔接词使用欠丰富，层次欠清晰；句式偏短，建议加强复杂句的使用；文章用词太过单一，文章拼写错误比较多。

hi! my firend,did you come to china?china is a beatifulplace.I konw many intrestingplace and I had gone.The most beatifulplace is xishuangbangna.The peaple very kind and if you go there ,you would get welcome.however,The here wether is very hot,you would better wear cold. I promise you don't have down and you will have a deep mamerise.