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语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；能够使用一些不错的从句；部分高级词汇也能熟练使用，但文中有较多拼写错误。
nowadays, with the development of economy, people are paying more attetion on their material lifes instead of the natural envieronment. acutually, the economic improvement and the environmental protection are not mutually exclusive, that is to say, achieving the balance between the economy and the nature is possible. however some people say that our natural resources are running out with an increasingly rate, and its too late to do anyting about the problem. however, as for me , its never too late to do anything. doing something is better than doing nothing. from now on, people should develop the idea of environmental protection and actively support the policy implemented by the government. at the same time other people believe that the effetive measures can be taken to improve this situation, and i do agree with that. and i do believe that the jiont effort put by both government and people could make our world cleaner and prettier. on the one hand, government should try their best to strictly take the policy into effect, and on the other hand, people must suppot the policy wholeheatedly. in this way, i believe, such kind of predicament could be relevied soon.
