文中词汇表达贫乏,但是单词拼写做的不错;文中基本没有过渡词和衔接词,建议增加衔接词汇的积累;句式偏短,建议加强复杂句的使用。
My best friend is a north woman,She is taller than me,but heavier than me.she hope get much money.She is work in Beijing .Every month we meet in restaurant .She like eat spice food.She has a cute daughter.She is thirty two years old.we always best friend.Her has brown wave hairs and light-skin.