高一英语作文模拟题:向游客介绍南京

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welcome to Nanjing!I am your guide and during the trip I will lead you to visit Nanjing.Nanjing,the capital of Jingsu province,is located in the southeast China.The number of the population of Nanjing is 5 million.Nanjing,a famous historic city,which was 10 dynasties' capital.Nanjing is a pretty beautiful city because of sums of places of interests,such as Xuanwu Lake,Jiming Temple,Stone city and so on.In addition,there are many modern factories and tall buildings in Nanjing.Finally I hope that you can have a good time here!