采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;能够使用一些不错的从句;作者词汇使用较为丰富熟练,单词拼写方面要更仔细。
With the developement of web,nowaday,when anything happen,whatever bad or good ,some people choose believe what the surf in the web,and think the point many people discuss is thruth. In fact,it is foolish to do that,you should not say the same as others.The world is complex.There are many evil things around us.For example,if a old women fail down in the road without any car or people hitted,she lay on the road,and says briefly a man who is stand near her hit her,and she require she need some money to see a doctor.what will do?Apparently,we should not believe the old women ,she is just says a lie. To sum up,we shuold have our own point to anything rather believe what we hear and see,it is unwise。
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