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THE DRAGON BOAT As we all know the dragon boat is one of the important national festivals in china,and i think this kind of festival is a good manner to memorise the hero in acient china. The dragon boat is a very interesting festival,we can do a lot of things on that day.for example,we can rowing in the river even with a match.not only the man on the boat is exciting,but also the audience is happiness.of course,in this important day can not miss the delicious food——rice dumplings.almost everyfamily will prepare the rice dumplings before the dragon boat coming.as a version,the food atracted all my eyes.and there i will tell you some ways to eat a special rice dumpling,we can sprinkle sugers on the rice dumplings ,if you don't like sweet,you also can add chili.it is so delicious. in a word,the dragon boat is not the way to memories quyuan ,bu also a favorite festival in china.it is so important for everychinese.