采用了恰当的衔接手法,层次清晰;若注意部分错误,文章会更漂亮;作者能较灵活地使用词汇,高级词汇使用较恰当,但存在一些拼写错误。
With the development of web,Nowadays when anything happened,whatever bad or good,some people choose believe what the surf in the web,and think the point many people discuss are truthful. In fact,it is foolish to do that,you should not say the same as others.The world is complex.There are many evil things around us.For example,if a old women fail down in the road without any car or people hitted,she lay on the road,and says briefly a man who is stand near her hit her,and she require she need some money to see a doctor.what will do?Apparently,we should not believe the old women ,she is just says a lie. To sum up,we shuold have our own point to anything rather believe what we hear and see,it is unwise。
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