恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词,衔接手法做的很棒;文中应适当增加从句和长难句的使用;作者词汇表达比较多样,也能较好的使用一些高级词汇。
With the development of web,Nowadays when anything happened,whatever bad or good,some people choose believe what the surf in the web,and think the point many people discuss are truthful. In fact,it is foolish to do that.So you should not say the same as others.The world is complex.There are many evil things around us.For example,if a old women fail down in the road without any car or people hit,she lies on the road,and says briefly a man who is stand near her hit her,and she require she need some money to see a doctor.What will do?Apparently,we should not believe the old women she is just says a lie. To sum up,we shuold have our own point to anything rather believe what we hear and see,it is unwise。
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