文中单词拼写做的很棒,再多积累些词汇就更好了;可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用;衔接成分太少,文章结构欠佳。
Do you want to help others? Yes, I do. When I was 6 years old, I had a dream to become a teacher. I want teach my student at english.On account of my family, I didn't choice the specialization english, I'm very regret.But now, I have a chance to be a volunteer, and I can go to the mountain for teaching student poor. I'm very glad to have this chance, I will try my best for teach my student.
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