单词拼写做的不错,文中词汇表达贫乏;文中有几处句子错误;采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅。
my favorite sport My favorite sport to play football,A chance to let you fall in love with the football; On the way home found a football, then I play with friends, from deeply in love with football,I often in training and competition with my classmates,My favorite football star is Britain's David Beckham; The biggest wish is to become a professional football player。