高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

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In the past,my hometown was planted trees.The rivers were full of fish.Th houses were old and strees were not wide.People live and work simply.But,now,many high bludings were built.The roads offen filled with cars.And with the development of industry,environment is wrose.The trees reduce ang fish disappear.It is improtant for us to heal the prolution.