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文章在句法方面做的很棒，从句和复杂句的使用不错；语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；拼写很棒，可适当增加高级词汇的使用。
As we all know,everyone's life time is limited.Instead of wasting time,all we need to do is spending it for something that will outlast it while there are some measures following. For one hand,we should know what we want clearly.In other words,we need to have a dream and then keep it in your mind and chase it persistently. As a saying goes,dreams make people famous.With a clear target,we will have a determined faith and be able to get closer and closer to our dreams even though there are a lot of difficulties that need to be cope with.We may feel our life more meaningful once we reached our goal. For another hand,we should be a good people to help others in need.It will not only have a significant effect on other people but also will make us feel happy which will outlast our life meaning finally. In conclusion,to outlast our life,we need to have a great faith and give our help to others when they are needed.Only in this way can we give rise to a more colorful and bright life!
