文中词汇表达贫乏,但是单词拼写做的不错;加强长句的练习,会取得更不错的成绩;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用。
my good friend is Li. she is kind and interested. She likes playing basketball. Last year she was going to another school. I really miss her. When together, we play games, such as chess. We also go home together. When someone meet the trouble , Li come to help them.