文章在句法方面做的很棒,从句和复杂句的使用不错;文章结构不错,使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词;作者词汇量积累不错,也能较好的使用一些高级词汇。
What I Have Learned From My Years at University Time flies! Just in a few months' time i am going to graduate from university to step into society.When i look back these four years in the college, i am grateful because my college years have prepared my future life, which taught me a lot of things. First of all, the independence.What made the college life majorly differs from the high schools' is that college life provides students more freedom and independence. That means the students can learn how to live their lives by themselves or how to deal with the difficulties in the study or work.It is universailly acknowledged that the university is the first step to the society, thus this kind of independence is totally beneficial for me to fit the society . Apart from that, these four years also help me to think critically, so that i can avoid the personal preference, to some extent. Thanks to it, i seldom follow the general trends.I would rather take advantage of my own wisdom than to believe the authority blindly. I would like to accept various opinions but not the only one. To this society, full of innovaton and imagination, critical thinking is crucial and necessary. Finally, just as the proverb goes:all the college teached is that it couldn't teach anything. So it is. What i learned most in the university is the self-learning. Given that the knowledge is endless, thus we everyone should have the habit of learning for whole life. The ability of study will cover my shortage of other parts, such as experiment after entering society. Contributed to the four years, i learned to be an independent,critical thinker and lifelong learner, and all of these will prepare for my brighter future life.