2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；作者词汇量有些小，要注意检查拼写错误；过渡词和衔接词使用欠丰富，层次欠清晰。

Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong Will Everyone wants to be a winner,but we should know that it is not easy to make it .we always say there is no free lunch .if you want something you must try you best . Do you have a strong will.there is a will there is a way,if you have a strong will you can beat lots of diffculty.there are many mountains on the way to succeess that can make you tired and sad .how do you face them ?go ahead or go back ? go ahead you will be a great man or you are loser. As a student if you don’t study hard you will be nothing.it is a good time to study something so if you want to be a great man learn something now.