2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):手机

采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅；作者应适量增加从句的使用量；文章词汇不够丰富，但单词拼写要认真检查。

for the purpose of the development of the techology,mobile phone is becoming more and more popular.there is no doubt that it's so convenient for people's life,but it also brings about many problems. for example,the time that people spend in the cell phone is more than that in the work,and most of the people are near sight.in the future,people maybe crossing the road looking at their cell phones and using walking sticks in order to see. in fact,we should using this techology properly,never to much or to little.