2009全国中考英语试题汇编试题(55)写作:雾霾天气（haze weather)

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Recently, the haze weather has pappened to many cities in the northe of China. This weahte r give some disadevange for the lives of people. for example,firstly the haze weather made lots of people disease not to go to school for students. Secendly. the haze weather made traffic events because the low visual bility. for that haze weather had lots of disadvange, so we all make endavour to distict that. the people needing go out should put on the subway or by bus not car in order to dismiss the of the hazed thing to the air. the poinsouly factory should tranfer the distant from the big city or place with mass of human.