2009全国中考英语试题汇编试题(55)写作:雾霾天气（haze weather)

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Recently, the haze weather has pappened to many cities in the north of China. This weahter give some disadvantage for the lives of person. For example,firstly the haze weather made lots of people disease not to go to school for students. Secondly. the haze weather made traffic events because the low visibility. For that haze weather had lots of disadvantage, so we all make endavour to elimiate that. the people needing go out should put on the subway or by bus not car in order to dismiss the of the hazed thing to the air. the poisonous factory should transfer to remote sita from the big city or place with mass of human.