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Recently our school make active of that protecting envirments starting ourselvies actives. It is our every people's duty to protect the envirments. Because the envirment will make effects of the people's heath. effecting our the qulity of our living. and poisous to the the living on the earth. and cause the traffic aciddents. so we must do some thing for ourselves. I suggest we go outside take public transportation, or walk, ride bike not drive cars. we should plant some trees to absorbed the poisous atmosphere.