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Recently our school make active of that protecting environments starting ourselves actives. It is our every people's duty to protect the envirments. Because the environment will make effects of the people's heath. effecting our the quality of our living. and poisonous to the the living on the earth. and cause the traffic aciddents. so we must do some thing for ourselves. I suggest we go outside take public transportation, or walk, ride bike not drive cars. we should plant some trees to absorbed the poisonous atmosphere.