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作者词汇表达较丰富准确，不过高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间；可适当增加复杂句的使用量；衔接成分很少出现，文章结构欠严谨。
Recently our school make active of that protecting environments starting ourselves actives. It is our every people's duty to protect the environments. Because the environment will make effects of the people's heath. effecting our the quality of our living. and poisonous to the the living on the earth. and cause the traffic aciddents. so we must do some thing for ourselves. I suggest we go outside take public transportation, or walk, ride bike not drive cars. we should plant some trees to absorbed the poisonous atmosphere.
