简单句比重稍微偏高,注意个别句子错误;作者词汇使用较为丰富熟练,单词拼写方面要更仔细;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词。
Recently our school makes active of that to protect environments starting ourselves actives. It is our every people's duty to protect the environments. Because the environment will effect the health of people, our living quality, and poison to the other living on the earth. what's more, the bad envionments usally cause the traffic aciddents. so we must do something for ourselves. I suggest we go outside take public transportation, or walk, ride bike not drive cars. we should plant some trees to absorb the poisonous atmosphere.