2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

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My views on Online Shopping It is knowledges that Online Shopping became a fashion now.However,it will bring many advantages,and many problems. As far as I'm concerned,we should have a good opinion on Online Shopping.At first,we will be reconized with Online Shopping and knows what to do.Secondly,we had better to go shopping on official websites.At last,