托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；文中一些从句的使用为文章增色；文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用高级词汇就更好了。

snap judgements cannot be trusted. based on my own experience , i can't agree with this view more ,I strongly believe that the foundation of a sense judgement is researching one day ,I went to a bathroom in a shopping center ,there was a really beautiful woman walking out of one booth , I thought how pretty she is. But when I went to the exact booth, I found out the she didn’t flush the toilet, I was so angry ,i thought how could a beautiful woman behaved like this ,it was so uncivilized. But when my hands reached out to the flush button ,I realized that it was broken. Obviously ,the snap judgement I made earlier was wrong ,so if you jump into a judgement without any kind of knowledge about something ,there is a big chances that your judgement might not be correct.