托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；作者句法基本功不错，可适当增加从句的使用；文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用高级词汇就更好了。

Snap judgements cannot be trusted. Based on my own experience , I can't agree with this view more ,I strongly believe that the foundation of a judgement is researching. One day ,I went to a bathroom in a shopping center ,there was a really beautiful woman walking out of one booth , I thought how pretty she was. But when I went to the booth she used, I found out that she didn’t flush the toilet, I was so angry ,I thought how could a beautiful woman behaved like this ,it was so uncivilized. But when my hands reached out to the flush button, I realized that it was broken. Obviously, the snap judgement I made earlier was wrong, so if you jump into a judgement without any kind of knowledge about something, there is a big chance that your judgement might not be correct.