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Every coin has two sides.With the development of technology,our society has become a world of information explosion and we can easily get the information we want from the Internet, TV,and so on.However,we may also receive a lot of useless information which we want to avoid it. For one hand,there are advertisements everywhere,and we are forced to watch them.Once we opened an app on our telephone or watched some videos online,we must wait until the advertisement is finished.It wastes our time and we don't know the product they sell good or not which may give rise to misleading.For another hand,it is difficult to identify the truth of the information we get.The sham and wrong information may have a bad effect on our society according to the media.And I think the media should be more objective and have a good moral.It will contribute to the development of our society and will cope with a lot of problems caused by wrong messages. In balance,we should be a person with a clear mind to pick up some useful information.Only in this way can we make good use of our time and energy without disturbed by useless information.