高级词汇需要继续积累,单词拼写不错;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;行文稍欠流畅,应适当增加连接词的使用。
Recently, I had read a book Pride and Prejudice which wrote by Jane Austin. It left me a deep impression for me. When I finished reading the book, I was delighted at Elizabeth and Darcys'happy ending. The book is talking about four pieces of marriage, Elizabeth and Darcys, Jane and Bingley, Lydia and Wickham, Charlotte and Collins which exposed their survival problems and the view of marriage. The most impressive is the sentence,"It is a truth universally acknowledged, that... " That's about the problems between love and money.Charlotte and Collins'marriage told me that money played an important role in their life. As for Charlotte, she was only addicted to enjoying the material rather than spiritual enjoyment. Instead, Elizabeth and Darcys'marriage got rid of money. They understood each other by conversation to win the true love. Although they experienced ups and downs, they were also happy. So, as far as I am concerned, love doesn't evaluate by money. On the one hand, money is not everything. People can buy everything they want with money, which can meet their material and spiritual needs,but money can't buy health, happiness or love. On the other hand, if money can measure love, the love will go bad. So the bad thing should throw out. In the same way, the degenerative love, you may make up your mind to throw it. In short, you should firmly believe your faith when you pursue your love.