2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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Hi,my friends.My hometown is in HzngZhou,ZheJiang.As we all known,it's a very famous view place in China.There are many beautyfull seneries in there and many kinds people.Now,let me take you to vister this city. First of all,we can go to the west lake.Many tourists will go there see the view and taking many photos.Secondly,we can have a fun experiexce to pick the tea.It is very interesting.And than,you can drink a cup of tea of LongJing in the afternoon.It's so relaxing .Finally,we can go the HeFang street .There are many delicious snacks and there still preceive some history.Many people like to go there have fun. Welcome to China,there also have many famous history views.It is believe that my hometown will let you satisfied with it.Come on.