高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

文章组织结构良好；文章用词太过单一，且单词拼写错误较多；采用了一些简单的从句。

formerly my hometown trees surround，the fish played in the river clear。house humble and local street。people work dillgent and living a poor lift。now，there are high building and large mansions and many cars in the street 。because there are more and more industry so environment chang bad。green trees are reduceing and fish are dieing out