高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

文章衔接手法恰当；有效地采用了一些简单的从句为文章增色；文中词汇表达不够丰富，且有较多拼写错误。

in the past,hometown has been tree ,the river was blue an plenty of fish swinging here,the house was sinple and rode was small .peoples work life was poor .nowsday,the higjt bilding is more ang more highter,the car more ang more as,the factory development,environment becoming bad,the tress is becoming less,fish is disappered,so propect environment is impotant