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作者词汇表达比较灵活多变，尤其是高级词汇使用较恰当；文中应增加从句和复合句的使用；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。
Nowadays,campus construction has become the focus of attention. According to a survey,almost all the schools are rebuilding their campus include the teaching buildings and the circumstances. In this essay,I will discuss the importance of campus construction and put forword my own view on it. A lot of efforts have been made to better the campus environment,in particular,the construction of a green campus. Many schools have taken serious measures to build environmental friendly campus,such as lawns,artificial pools,and tree-lined roads. However,in my view,this is only the initial step and we can do more. To begin with,the schools may implement strict regulation of waste on campus: no matter the leftovers in canteens or the litter in classrooms. Moreover,on the student side,we can use green bags instead of disposable plastic bags and use more recycling chopsticks and bowls. In addition,the most important thing for everyone is that we should raise our awareness of environmental protection.
