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文章结构严谨，有效地使用了语句间的衔接成分；作者能较灵活地使用词汇，高级词汇使用较恰当，但存在一些拼写错误；采用了一些简单的从句。
It so delight to hear that you will come to visit my hometown pretty soon，I am so happy that I have draft a travel line for you in advance.Say truely that there so many interestingplace deserve to go、 so that maybe you can't touring both of them but unnecessary worry about it I already work out it for you . The first aim station I will lead you to visit SHI ZHONG mountain where there is located in PO YANG lake.Not only owing to many relic in the mountain but also there you can see a mysterious view only occur in PO YANG lake. you will knew what it is at that time.The second place is LONG GONG cave 、in there you will know how is the genuine nature miracle.And finally we will to a special restaurant to tase special food that you can't eat in foreign.welcome come to China.
