单词拼写做的很棒,还请注意增加词汇的积累;层次分明,但过渡词欠缺;句法知识较好,但需加强句式变化。
Hi, this is Cherry, I would introduce my good friend to you . She name is marry, she is beautiful and very nice. we play together , we fly kate and read book together. she has gold hair and brown eyes , she also very happy , we are really good friend , hope we will be good friend all the time.