托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第51篇:住在乡下是否比城市好

采用了适当的衔接手法，层次清晰；从句使用很不错，再接再厉；文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用高级词汇就更好了。

Some people claim living in a rural area is better than living around a lot of people.as far as I am concerned, when I was a little girl living in the countryside, I had always dreamed for big city. But when I have finally settled in a big city, I start to know what I am missing out living in the city. The city is always full of people anywhere, it is even impossible to go to a supermarket on holidays because there would be millions of people. My apartment is on 15th floor, every time I look down from the windows to the little garden in the neighborhood, I find myself really miss my parent’s little yard in the countryside, where I used to enjoy my book and a cup of tea near beautiful flowers varied in colors, smelling the sweet scent of soil and listening to the singing of bird. If I can make enough money in the countryside ,I really prefer to live in a house in the rural place with a nice garden and being close to mother nature.