2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

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Now more and more people can not work without computer. It's about 20 years ago, computer had not been used so wildly, and at that time, many jobs such as table,editor,illustuation,had to be done by ourselves, of course, mistakes always appeared here and there.I think this should be regarded as on profe that the computer is more intelligenc than the human brain.In fact, there's a lot of worries and arguements about whether the computer could take all the place of people. Though it just the purpos why the people invent computer,but after all, computer is just a tool,so it was from the begining it was invented,and still is now even it has so wildly used in our life today.