语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;文章词汇使用较为恰当灵活,希望能更熟练地使用高级词汇作者句法很棒,合理使用了复杂句。
Faced with problems and solved them As a popular saying goes,"happiness is not the absence of problems,but the ability to deal with them",while most of us expected to live a life without any of difficulties.However,it is hopelessly to keep ourselves away from problems.Thus,we must learn to face it and solve it. In my opinion,I believe problems may be good things sometimes and there are some reasons following.For one hand,once we faced with some difficulties,we will be pushed to figure out some plans to deal with it which will bring a lot of benefits to our improvement of abilities,such as the ability of communication and action which will be great useful in our daily life.For another hand,it will also help us build up patience and self-confidence when we finally overcome the difficulty.It will bring us a lot of fun and happiness for we have achieved which will make our life more colorful and meaningful. In conclusion,instead of being afraid of troubles,we should face with problems bravely and find our own way to solve it while getting something is beneficial.Only in this way,can you have a successful and happy life.