1995年专四作文真题范文:Discuss part-time job

采用了恰当的衔接手法，层次清晰；作者句法很棒，合理使用了复杂句；词汇表达不够丰富，要增加高级词汇的使用。

With the history of two thousand years,education in our country has been a system than before.Educational system has become consummated,especially for junior high school students,according to the current situation,how to improve their interests of English learning is a main problem,English in Junior school is the first condition in the critical period of learning English and exploring measures and methods of cultivating junior school student of learning English.