小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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My name is Amy .I have good friend . she is a beautiful girl.She can speak English , and she name is Bai Jie. She hair is very long, and she hair is blue.She like reading books,play computer.she like eating apple and banana.But she does't like coffee. She is morning person. she has great fashion sense.