语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;作者在句法层面做的很棒;作者能较熟练、灵活地使用词汇,建议要多使用高级词汇。
There are a lot of stories in Chinese culture abort the main meanings that a man should be regarded very cleaver if he could give a correct judgement with so limitted informations. For example, with a leave falling down from the tree,you should know the autumn will be coming sooner. In fact, relationships among the appearances exit here and there, and some of them are always and sure, if we could grasp them, we'll be able to get the correct conclusion immediately just we need. But on the other hand, not all the relationships among the appearances could be called rule, and if you make a logical mistake, then a mistake judgement will be there waiting for you. So,it's not wisdom to get your conclusion just as you hear or find something immediately.
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