2.然后以约120个词就 “过度依赖电脑的弊端”的主题发表看法,
并包括如下要点:
沉迷于电脑对学生造成的不利影响;行文较为流畅,作者文中过渡词使用的不错;能够使用一些简单的从句;作者在高级词汇的积累上还要再接再厉,另外请检查文章的单词拼写。
the disadvanteges of depend on computers over From this passage,we can learn that many people have become a servant of the computers in the current society.becouse of it's high speed of caculate and big capasity of memory.and now i would like to dissuse the disavanteges of relies too much on computers. at fist,for the most stdents,ues a computer is a very danger's things,becourse they have a weak will to defence themself and will added to the computer eazily.so they will cost too much time and energy on the computers to keep energy and studing. the next,for some people who is good at computer like hacher will do some illigal things by their abillity.they will stealling passwords or rob a bank just don't like working. and the last but most point is that using a computer need a lot of money,expecially for the teenagers,they have no enough money to afford this cost just aksing for their parents ,this will heavy the press of some family. so,we can make a conclusion that playing too much on the computer is bad for us.