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2009年专八英语作文真题:方言在公众场合使用

发布时间:2013-05-18 17:21浏览次数:10552
要求:
题目 Are Dialects Just as Acceptable in Public Places?
说明 Are Dialects Just as Acceptable in Public Places?
要求
1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement
2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details
3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
字数:300满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分69.5分
评语:

过渡词很丰富,衔接词同时使用的恰到好处;若注意部分错误,文章会更漂亮;词汇表达用的较丰富,另外请检查文章的单词拼写。

用户练习作文:

I lived in town with my grandmother until i went to primary school. So, I spoke dialect for many years. However, when I went college, I think I was supposed to talk with my classmates by putonghua. So I definetly support the idea that dialect are not acceptable in public places. There will be several points to be responsible for my thoughts. Just like in the college, not only just students, but also teachers come from so many different places, such as Hunan, Hubei, Heilongjiang, Tibet or other provinces in China. people will find a large barrier when coumunicating if they talk to each other by their own dialect. and what's more, teacher will not be uderstood by students if they use dialect. Also, if you are a worker, and you are meeting an important client, and you have to persuade him to trust your firm and sign on the contract, it will be a neccessity for you to speak fulently and convince your client. Speaking Putonghua fluently will leave an expression of capacity and smart. As for as i am concerned, dialect can just be spoken when you are talking to your families or at homeland. you had better speak fluent Putonghua in the public place. You can not only just to let yourself be known by others, but also leave an good expression to those you want to leave.

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