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邢台二中2012―2013学年上学期高二年级期末测试试卷英语作文

发布时间:2013-05-17 17:27浏览次数:6620
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2010年以来,我国相继发生了几起校园暴力事件,使国人为之震惊,震惊之余,大家都陷入了沉思:我们该如何加强校园安全呢?请你以How to improve school safety为题,写一篇120词左右的短文。
参考词汇:校园campus 保安security guard
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文中词汇表达较丰富恰当,但学术词汇稍显不足;作者有一定功底,可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆;文章结构不错,使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词。

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How to improve school safety   Recently,school safety becomes a social focus.School safety is a rather important problem.Everyone is supposed to make great efforts enable to keep students safe.   Now,I provide some measures for everyone about this problem.Above of all,I think that security guards ought to check anyone who wants to enter the campus,and learn about what he wants to do.In addition,security guards should look around the campus orderly in order that they can keep students and teachers away from danger.Besides,not only keeping safe is security guards' duty but also students need to be told that they mustn't go to the dangerous areas and face gangsters,kidnappers or bad man alone.The last but not least,from now on,all people are supposed to act so that students can grow healthily.   In a word,it's the most important matter for students to keep safety in mind whatever they do.   

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