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Whether you'll put all eggs in one basket? Perhaps everyone have been asked the same question. When there are two or more chances, we'll be advised to treat them differently in orde to avoid losing all of them only because of one reason. This is the popular attitude about chance, and it's obviously correct. But here I want to say, more chances sometimes mean no chance. In our common life, we just put all eggs in one basket. Everytime when you move the basket, you'll pay more attention to it, fasten it tightly, act slowly. Perhaps you have noticed that the falling down of an egg-basket do not happen always, I think that's just because all eggs are put in one basket. So, my conclusion is ,not all eggs in one basket, but you attitude how you treat the basket, is the reason whether you could grasp the eggs.