题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
字数:150满分:100分
文章结构不错,使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词;从句使用稍显不足,注意个别句子错误;作者高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间,词汇表达灵活性也要提高,单词拼写错误较多。
No all problems you meet with could be solved by yourself, so coopperating with others is very important. Trust is the base of cooperation. In our social life, some people pay more attention to the benifit our co-worker could bring to us, but perhaps you ignorant the importance of the trust. Different to any other animals, person will select to help his frinds withou any self requirement, only becaus of trust, but if he was cheated, he would give this idea up.