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小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

发布时间:2013-05-15 11:36浏览次数:36951
要求:
用英文描述下自己的好朋友。
用户的作文(系统评分34.0分
评语:

单词拼写做的很棒,还请注意增加词汇的积累;加强一些长句和复杂句的使用;行文流畅,但衔接词比较少。

用户练习作文:

Xue Lian is my good friend. She is a sweet girl. She has two big eyes and long back hair. She is very lazy. She doesn't like clean the house. She doesn't like doing every exercise. Cake is her favorite food. She is living in Kunshan now. with his son and her husband together. Her husband is a teacher. Her handwrite is very beautiful. and she is good at drawing.

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