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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
采用了恰当的衔接手法，层次清晰；文中应增加一些长难句的使用，会为文章添彩；请注意文中用词的丰富度以及单词拼写，高级词汇的希望能更熟练一些
As the development of our society, computer becomes an important part of daily life. More and more people tend to communicate by the computer. Just like the parents on th e picture, they talk with their children upstairs on line instead of talking about each other face to face. In fact, no matter young people or the olders, they choose to express their emotion on the internet. Electronic communication is so convenient that lots of people like it. While, each coin has two sides. Some people think it is necessary to communicate with each other by the face to face. For example, when you need to make an important desicion, you should to express your idea completely and let other kown what you are talking about. What's more, communicating by face to face can maintain and build up the relationship with people. from my perspective, electronic communication can not replace face to face contact. Each one of us can not live without society.
