小学一年级英语作文:My dog

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I have a back dog, I named it Dudu. I picked it up in a winter morning , it was very cold. it was throwed out on side of the road in the community. it was thin and weak when i found it. After I take it in my home, I feed it meat and milk, it is fat and health now. It is 9 years old this year.