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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:00浏览次数:17443
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题目:Computer and Man人与电脑

字数:150满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分79.5分
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作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达,但高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间;文章在句法方面做的很棒,从句和复杂句的使用不错;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨。

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Computer and Man With the development of technology,computers have become more and more popular which people can use it for work,playing online games,chatting with friends and so on.There is no denying the fact that it brings us a great convenience from which we have gained a lot of benefits and it makes our life more colorful and effective. However,every coin has two sides.Computers also give rise to some bad effects in our social life.For one hand,more and more people tend to set in front of computers to do their own works instead of communicating with others occasionally like before.It will bring coldness in our society.For another hand,seting in front of computers also develops some physical diseases because we will have less time to do more exercises to keep our health.The more time we spend in using our computers,the more lazier we will be to get off the chair and have an outdoor activity with friends. In conclusion,our time should be arranged properly while we are using our computers.We should take a break while we have used computers for one hour or more.Only in this way can you make good use of the computer and have a more heathy and meaningful life.

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