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learn to control your money As a saying going,'money is everything and money is nothing'.Money may help you achieve many goals,buy many things, but money can not afford love,frishenship and passing time.If you are rich,don not waste, If you are poor, You should be thrifty and still be happy. so my opinion is whoerver you are ,learn to control your money and don't let money control you. As a student,of course I am not rich.Thers is by no means for me to gain a luxury life.It has been reported that some of my peers even sold their kidney for a iphone 6.This is absurd.As for me,I will not cherish this expensive goods which is not fit for our stage. So first,one should have a correct idea about who he is,what they own,and the most important one is what you want to do in the future. If you want to be successful and can have enough money to support your family, you should wok hard now.Some one else who controled by money but not have much may sob, steal.This is ilegal and it is more severe. So we sholud learn to control money.wo should earn money through our dillegency and honesty,in this way ,we can really spend our money happily.
